Te Mata Peak Daredevils
By Annalise
“Should we or should we not?” I said to Tiffany.
“Well if we want to be daredevils then yes,” Tiffany shouted. I thought for a moment, just standing there wondering if sliding down this thin, long shortcut would be a good idea.
I looked at Tiffany, she nodded ,so we started walking. But then suddenly Tiffany realised that it was nearly a 90 degrees slope. We fell on our butts and started sliding down a rocky, bumpy hill. Dirt was flicking on our faces. Down.. Down.. Down.
Till I spotted a prickle just up ahead.
I shouted out to Tiffany, “watch out” but it was too late, her hand had just been planted right on top of the pointy little prickle.
I was looking back at Tiffany to see if she was ok, She said, “I’m alright”.
I turned back around and saw the end on the short cut.
Tiffany and I didn’t realise that it just ended as a drop.
I tried to stop myself before it ended but it was too late. I fell and landed on the actual track on my but. I yelled “Tiffany Stop” but she didn’t hear me instead she landed right next to me.
Sounds like a fun time.
ReplyDeletewhat a interesting story annalise great use of words
ReplyDeleteI don't think I would like either the prickle part, or landing on my butt!! I was waiting to read that Tiffany landed ON TOP OF YOU, but luckily she landed beside you - I guess that would mean you BOTH would have sore bottoms : O
ReplyDeleteDad xx
That sounds so fun, it must have hurt.
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