Friday, 26 February 2016

Camping In the Country

“ Are we there yet” I sighed.
“Just about nutbar” Dad said. We were on our way to a campsite, just dad, Ethan and I. It was an hour away from Hastings, and I wasn’t looking forward to it.

Finally we arrived. There were only three other campers and hundreds of bugs. Dad drove on through the path until we found a spot to set the tent. I hopped out of the car and straight away bugs flew right at me. “AAAHHH, dad the bugs!” I screamed. Ethan threw the insect repellent at me and I sprayed it on. The coldness sent a shiver down my spine.

I threw a jacket on and went for a walk. As I was exploring I saw a movement in the grass it was a dead rabbit and there were bugs everywhere around it. I ran back to dad because of two reasons. One, I don’t like bugs and two, I don’t like dead things. It was getting dark and he had already made some dinner for us (I hope there's no bugs in that) and then we went to bed.

19 comments:

  1. Me neither Annalise! I don't like bugs and I don't like dead things!!
    Good story (except that your Dad called you a nutbar!!). Mum :)

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  2. Great story Annalise, we should go camping all the time!!! Dad xx

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  3. Good story Annalise. :)

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  6. That is a really cool story. I hate bugs to :):):)

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  7. cool story Annalise

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  8. Great story! i hate bugs and dead things to!! :)

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  9. great writing annalise!!!!:) ;)

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  10. great writing annalise!!!!:) ;)

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  11. I want to read more and I HATE BUGS

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  12. god work on your recount writing

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  13. Well done Annalise, I hate most bugs.

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  14. great story. I don't enjoy dead rabbits either

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  15. great story. I don't enjoy dead rabbits either

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  16. I really love your story, I was camping in the holidays and it was so weird! (I also hate bugs)

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  17. i felt like i was there with you it was well told and so funny

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  18. Cool story,very funny (:

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  19. Cool story,very funny (:

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